User blog:Dereviewer/Final Draft

Hey guys, it's Derevieweer again. So I saw some of your comments on my last blog about my story where Gargamel impersonates Brainy to infiltrate the village. So here are some details I left out. After Gargamel captures Brainy, takes him to his hovel and locks him in a cage, he goes over to his cauldron and mixes up a bunch of ingredients to create a transformation potion. Once the ingredients are mixed, he pours them into a vial, drinks it, and within a matter of seconds, Gargamel transforms into an exact duplicate of Brainy, looking and sounding just like him. He then leaves Scruple and Azrael to make sure the real Brainy doesn't escape. Meanwhile, Papa Smurf realizes that Brainy is missing, so he sends Dreamy and Naughty Smurfette to go out and search for him. As they're looking for him, they come across Gargamel (disguised as Brainy) and believe that he's the real Brainy. He tells Naughty and Dreamy that he was captured by Gargamel and that he barely escaped with his life. So Dreamy and Naughty take Gargamel-Brainy back to the village. After a few days pass, Gargamel-Brainy is incredibly rude to the Smurfs. Hefty realizes this and starts to become suspicious. But while Hefty is suspicious, the other Smurfs think "Brainy" is just in a bad mood. Hefty also notices that he'd been acting strange ever since he got back from Gargamel's. So Hefty goes to Gargamel's hovel to find out what's going on. He peers in through the window to see that Azreal is napping and Scruple is sitting in a chair while Brainy is still locked in the cage. Hefty then realizes that the Brainy he saw back at the village was an imposter. So he sneaks into the hovel to try and free Brainy, but he gets caught by Scruple and then Scruple locks Hefty in the cage with Brainy. But Scruple falls asleep, allowing Brainy and Hefty to escape. Then, they both run back to the village and expose the fake Brainy as an imposter. Then, Gargamel transforms back into himself, causing the Smurfs to panic and run around. Gargamel captures them all and returns to his hovel. While Gargamel is reveling in his victory, he is distracted long enough for the Smurfs to escape and hurry back to the village. The Smurfs are very happy to have the real Brainy back. Brainy says he's glad to be back to, but then he starts going on with one of his endless speeches, making the other Smurfs boot him out of the village as usual. Brainy then says, "Yes, it's good to be home", and there you have it. So now that you've all heard the story with more detail, what do you think?