Talk:Papa Smurf & Mama Smurfette/Part 7/@comment-4165715-20140326204101

After finally taking initiative to read this story, I must say that your progression of the relationships between every Smurf, Smurfette and Papa, and the inclusion of the third-party individuals is quite well-formulated. Timing was well adjusted as well, and I especially found the deterioration of Papa and Smurfette's relationship highly believable. I could visualize what was happening in Part 6 quite well.

Well done, Vic.