User blog comment:Dereviewer/Fanfic Idea/@comment-24685871-20160215161419/@comment-4165715-20160227042833

It's not necessarily a bad idea by any means. For the most part, it's all very in-character and believable, but lacks creativity. How exactly does Gargamel disguise himself as Brainy and return to the village? What development does this push the involved cast into, and how do the Smurfs escape when Gargamel captures them all before the end? There is room to grow in this story if you put some more focused thought into it.