User blog:Dereviewer/Fanfic Idea

Hello everyone, I'm Dereviewer and I'm new to this Wikia. I got a little bored so I decided to come up with my own Smurfs fanfic. I came up with it after I read the "Hefty Smurf Hefty Smurf" fanfic story. My fanfic goes like this, Brainy is out in the forest picking Smurfberries, but little does he know that Gargamel and Azrael are hiding in a bush. As Brainy starts heading back to the Village, Gargamel jumps out from behind the bush, scoops Brainy up in a net, and takes him back to his hovel. There, he locks Brainy inside a cage and then uses a potion he created to disguise himself as Brainy and take his place to infiltrate the Smurf Village. At first, everyone, including Papa Smurf falls for the disguise. But Hefty realizes that Gargamel/Brainy is acting strange and starts to get suspicious. While impersonating Brainy, Gargamel is extremely rude to the Smurfs, making Hefty grow even more suspicious. But the other Smurfs think that "Brainy" is just having a bad time. Finally, Hefty confronts Gargamel/Brainy about this, which results in him capturing Hefty and taking him back to his hovel, where he locks Hefty inside the cage with the real Brainy. Working together, Hefty and Brainy escape Gargamel's hovel. Then, the two Smurfs run back to the village and expose Gargamel/Brainy as an impostor. Gargamel then turns back into himself and captures all the Smurfs. At his hovel, the Smurfs eventually manage to escape from Gargamel's clutches and they all head back to the village. The Smurfs are glad to have the real Brainy back. Brainy says he's glad to be back to, but then he goes on with one of his long speeches, which makes the other Smurfs boot him out of the village. Brainy then says "Yes, it's good to be home". And that's the end.

Feel free to tell me what you think of this idea. Did you like it, did you not like it? Feel free to even make some suggestions for it if you want. Post your comments below.