Talk:Don't Make Me Worry (Hero Stories)/@comment-4165715-20141218050404/@comment-4165715-20141219020953

It's not bad, but it doesn't sound like something a real person (or Smurf in this case) would say. The amount of times Saviour says "Papa Smurf," for instance, or Hero calling her "little one" are over the expected amount in literature. Sure, it's common for people to use one, two, sometimes three or even four particular nicknames to address another character by, but not in the same two or three sentences unless they are specifically trying to sound campy (like the classic "purposeful bad acting to be sarcastic" maneuver).